We Were Babies

A Ping Pong Poem

 

stepping out                that place

we endeavoured                     scree slope

on loan                                   script rewritten

small beer                   hombre sincero

 

sensitive side              the infinite question

we were babies                       among the builders

unalloyed                    formula wretches

lost square fields                    unto us

 

brief notes                  high weather

graduates follow                    factory closures

liquid crystal              latest edition

smart palaces             vector sandwich

 

George Mitchell

I wrote this “fragment” poem about two months ago. I came across it again recently and decided it was a Ping Pong Poem.

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